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Questions by ~djwildthing:icondjwildthing:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Open


If you know what you wish for is wrong,
Can you still wish for it?

If your dream is empty,
Can you still dream it?

If she doesn’t fill your heart
Can you give it to her?

When it’s over,
Can I still leave you my heart?

If I tell you I hate you,
Can I actually love you?

If my ideal world is one without me,
Is it wrong to want to live in it?

If I tell you that you understand me,
Can I confuse you?

If I tell the truth but I’m still lying
Should I just be silent?

If I am a knight, a warrior, a samurai,
Can I still be a bleeding heart?

If I tell you I’ll never leave you,
Would you let me go?

If I live for others,
Can I be selfish?

If my flame tires,
Would you let it expire?

If I need you desperately,
Would you let me be alone?

If I respect you,
Can I be arrogant towards you?

If I am jealous of you,
Can I be happy for you?

If I seek eternal knowledge,
Can I ignore the facts?

If I don’t know what the hell’s going on,
Can I know what to do?

If I’m not good for you,
Can I beg you to stay?

If you are everything I need,
Can I tell you to leave?

If I am a weapon,
Can I heal your hurts?

If I am an angel, sweetheart and kind,
Can I kill those I wish?

If I had the choice,
Could I change myself?

If you were me,
Who would you be?
©2008-2009 ~djwildthing
:icondjwildthing:

Author's Comments

I was feeling a little confused so i started writing some stuff in my head and then looked at it and kept going. this is the final product. Well i think its the final product cause i don't know how to edit it anymore. a few truths hidden in a whole lot of ideas. No-one take these as my feelings per say. ask and i will tell. comments on anypart welcome

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~Sharzela Jul 28, 2008, 6:25:55 AM
:heart:
If my ideal world is one without me,
Is it wrong to want to live in it?

If I tell you I’ll never leave you,
Would you let me go?
:heart:

there are many lines there i really love, over half the question/answer pairs in fact... rather lovely :)
:icondjwildthing:
Mood: Joy ~djwildthing Jul 29, 2008, 5:49:01 AM
Thanks Shar!! i had no idea what anyone would thinkso i'm really glad you is loving it. those 2 are 2 of my favs
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Mood: Amazed ~StarChild47 Jul 29, 2008, 9:13:08 PM
Really awesome. Probably a very good thing you told me about this one.. :)

"If I tell you I’ll never leave you,
Would you let me go?

If I need you desperately,
Would you let me be alone?

If I’m not good for you,
Can I beg you to stay?"

These are my fav stanza's. You would've been able to figure that out though. I love the pairs. It's good! :+fav:

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"Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss, you'll land among the stars." ~Les Brown~
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~PanthersChild Jul 30, 2008, 3:21:44 AM
"If you know what you wish for is wrong,
Can you still wish for it?

If I’m not good for you,
Can I beg you to stay?"

are my faves.... :+fav:

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Sometimes the HEART should listen to the MIND. But sometimes the HEART should tell the MIND to stay at home and stop interfering!! :heart:

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