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She melts because of his flames
He freezes because of her ice

Together they stand
Equal yet opposite
Steam rising
Never quite getting it right

But to feel those flames
To feel the chill
To feel the light and know the dark

Is far better,
Than the shells,
That came before
Empty and desolate

The light moves them
The dark comforts them
Together they are whole

They fit
The balance found
At war but forever in peace
Oh the children of Fire and Ice
©2008-2009 ~djwildthing
:icondjwildthing:

Author's Comments

dammit i wrote it and i like it and damn! sorry! wanted to say damn! don't know why! Inspired by two songs that said the same thing but from different perspectives and were done by different artists.

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That is so cool. Flames, and Ice. I really really likes it. :+fav:
Especially,the part about how they never get it right, but that's better than desolation. :)

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"Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss, you'll land among the stars." ~Les Brown~
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this is really kwl! my favorite of your poems :) lovely metaphors :aww:

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Beautiful angel Ashley Callie...rest in peace. :heart:

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